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Naruto - Unlegendary
Ino and Sakura, no person is a legend to their friends.
Warning for references to the latest chapters.



When Ino was still in her first year at the Academy, she met another girl who wasn't pretty and was weak about it and got picked on accordingly. With the subconscious recognition of someone who would be a grateful follower--and the knowledge that she was too cool to be dragged down by the other girl's uncoolness--Ino led Sakura away from where she'd been hiding, let her wash her face and put on a bandage in the bathroom in her parents' store, and made a promise that was easy to keep because it wasn't very important to her. When Sakura showed up at the bench the next day, Ino gave her a ribbon and introduced her to the other girls she knew, and for a couple years they called themselves friends. Sakura had flourished a little when the other kids stopped picking on her, had gotten a little more social grace and ability to speak up in groups, but she always glanced over at Ino to make sure that the other girl agreed with what she was saying; and when Ino didn't, Sakura immediately began weakening her previous statements with opposite arguments until she made herself admit defeat. That's why Ino had been so surprised when, after she told Sakura she liked Sasuke too and had liked him longer, Sakura had hesitated and then for the first time refused to back down. Ino didn't need someone who wasn't going to listen to her; the friendship ended then.

If this sounds like the story of a life, keep reading.


After Sakura was accepted as Tsunade's pupil, Ino didn't see her much. A month before the mid-year chuunin exam, Asuma called team ten together and asked Chouji and Ino if they minded having Sakura take the exam with their team, since Shikamaru wouldn't have been allowed to participate past the forest section anyway. Chouji had looked to Shikamaru, who said he'd be glad not to go through the damn thing pointlessly again, and then to Ino, who silently wondered when Sakura had cut her hair again and said that they could afford to be charitable as long as she didn't slow them down.

Sakura had only raised an eyebrow briefly and said, "Don't worry about it."

Asuma made the three of them train every day and accept missions together, and prodded Shikamaru into joining too when he didn't have separate work, so that they would be cohesive in the second test. They already knew the secret to the first one--and this time Sakura would be willingly helping Ino and Chouji cheat--and the third one didn't involve teamwork, so the second was what Asuma was most concerned with.

"I thought she'd be different," Chouji said once, when they were walking back from practice.

"Huh?" Ino replied, taking another drink of water.

"Sakura," Chouji clarified. "With all that training she's been doing with the Hokage, I thought she'd be . . . I dunno, different."

Ino snorted. "It's Sakura. She's training to be a medicnin, she won't be different unless one of us breaks something. Otherwise it's still all smarts and a little genjutsu."

"She's pulling her moves," Shikamaru replied.

Ino gave him a look. "Hey, I fought her in the last exam, remember? She's not better than me."

Shikamaru rolled his eyes and didn't bother arguing.


Ino won her battle in the final exam. She was still making her way through the stadium's passages when Sakura's fight was announced over. It had taken one minute and forty-three seconds.

When Ino arrived at the balcony where all the genin taking the exam were waiting, she looked over the railing to see Sakura healing the Stonenin's broken hands. Part of the circular wall of the stadium was cracked, and the crowds were being shifted elsewhere until the structure was determined steady.

"What the hell?" Ino said.

"Shikamaru was right," Chouji replied

Ino watched as Sakura had the Stonenin test his healed fingers below, and couldn't decide what to say.

When Sakura came up to the balcony, Tenten was making her way down for her own fight. She nodded to the other teenager. "You live up to Tsunade-sama's reputation."

Sakura called back a thank you as Tenten left.

Ino later overheard Asuma tell Kakashi, who'd been absent that day because he was on a mission, that they hadn't bothered with the post-fight conversation with the kages and the jounins. Sakura had displayed intelligence and strength and an absence of bloodlust, and she was the Hokage's student; she made chuunin and then reacted to the announcement not with excitement but with the attitude of someone who had expected to win because she'd refused to fail.

Ino couldn't see their faces from where she was standing, but it wouldn't have mattered anyway--Kakashi's expression was hidden by his mask.


After the exams, Ino saw Sakura less than once every couple of months, and those times they were usually running across each other in public buildings. At first she thought Sakura was ignoring her, but after talking with the other people in their age groups, she realized that the only ones who had seen much of Sakura lately were Hinata and Kiba, and those were because of medical supply deliveries.

Ino was sometimes a little slow to pick up on things, not because she was stupid but because she was self-centered, but eventually she realized that Sakura was leaving her behind in favor of chasing after her expectations of the boys she hadn't seen in two years.

The night after she figured that out, Ino rang the doorbell of the Haruno household for the first time since they were children.


Sakura didn't drop by to see her before leaving on her latest mission; Ino didn't know she was gone until she went by the hospital to get a sprained wrist looked at. She didn't learn that Naruto had come back and left again, taking Sakura with him, until Shikamaru finished the work he'd been doing when Temari had abruptly left and mentioned it in reference to something else.

When Ino asked Asuma what kind of mission they'd been sent on, he'd later replied that the information was classified. Ino found out that Kakashi was gone, too; and she soon learned from Hinata that Neji's team had left as well. If Hinata knew why, she also only said that it was seemed to be classified.


Sakura and Naruto's return to Konoha was dramatic. They brought a sickly-looking-but-recovering Gaara with them, and what seemed like half of Suna's shinobi ate and slept for a night at the Leaf before heading back to the Sand. It didn't take long for stories of battles with Akatsuki and resurrections and an old woman's prophecies to begin, though no one was certain where the stories were coming from because Sakura wasn't a braggart and Naruto fell into odd silences about a lot of the stuff involving Gaara.

Ino watched the two of them laugh at a comment from Neji, over something about Gai and Kakashi, and wondered what had happened to the timid girl who'd always glanced to her for confirmation on her opinions.


I didn't expect this change.



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[info]athelice
2005-10-17 05:46 am UTC (link)
Wow. This story has such a big impact! I think it really drives the contrast between pre-and post-time skip Sakura home. I love stories with minor character POVs. But you gotta feel sorry for Ino.
As usual, <3 your story!!!

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[info]reimars
2005-10-17 04:23 pm UTC (link)
*grin* Thank you!

I really hope Ino is going to show up when they get back to Konoha again--I can't wait to see her new design and if she treats the new Sakura differently. *grin* (Somehow I have the feeling she won't, because then she'd think she was giving Sakura too much credit.)

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[info]athelice
2005-10-17 04:45 pm UTC (link)
I wonder if Ino would somehow set her goals to chasing the new Sakura now, or if that's an impossible goal. I don't really see her content at being second best to Sakura though. It's definately something she has to overcome. (being "left behind" by Sakura must suck.)
(oh, and much love to the ICness of other characters. And wow, even Tenten! XD)

As for Kakashi...you gotta wonder why he was suprised at Sakura's strengh in the manga when Naruto appeared again. He acted as if he wasn't still around her for the past 2.5 years...

P.S. Where's the image of your icon from? I love it~

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[info]reimars
2005-10-17 08:33 pm UTC (link)
For Ino, I think she might take a look at Sakura smashing up trees with her bare hands and recognize that she has limits, but she'd also try to counter it by thinking, "Well, I'm better at this and this and that!" and then work harder on those areas to show Sakura up. But I always got the feeling that their rivalry was more on Sakura's side--remove Sasuke, and it's just not as important to Ino as it was to Sakura, who was in her shadow.

I was really startled that Kakashi was surprised at her. Maybe Kishimoto-sensei was just trying to figure out a way to fit in an explanation about her attack, but still. What on earth was he doing those two years and nine months? He couldn't have been on missions all the time.

Heh, thanks! It's from a doujinshi by Yuki Inoue, called AFSTAND (I have no idea what it's supposed to mean), and it's really gorgeous. It's a follow-up to a different doujinshi by her, I think--they can still be gotten from this post, though I have no idea which link is which.

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[info]ceresi
2005-10-17 04:50 pm UTC (link)
Sakura-chan! omg, I don't have a Sakura icon! ;_; Chloe's pretty close, though, right? :D

This was lovely lovely lovely. Very interesting/unusual beginning, one big block of text and then the teaser sentance beneath it. I like. :9 The bit about Sakura taking the chuunin exam with Ino and Chouji was fun, especially Shikamaru figuring out her game and Ino being all, "Whatever, bitch."

Ino was still making her way through the stadium's passages when Sakura's fight was announced over. It had taken one minute and forty-three seconds.

When Ino arrived at the balcony where all the genin taking the exam were waiting, she looked over the railing to see Sakura healing the Stonenin's broken hands. Part of the circular wall of the stadium was cracked, and the crowds were being shifted elsewhere until the structure was determined steady.

"What the hell?" Ino said.


Ahahaha! Okay, I admit, the first time I read this I didn't really get what was going on, that Ino missed Sakura's fight and then was confused when she saw the damage. Although I did get it the second time, and hee. Sakura-chan~! ♥ I like her little exchange with Tenten and the matter-of-fact way she gets promoted.

The last line is of course brilliant, because it summarizes Sakura so well and I want to have Sakura's babies.

♥♥♥! Awesome little ficlet, love it muchly!

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[info]reimars
2005-10-17 08:38 pm UTC (link)
But Sakura doesn't have a Wall of Weird! (I'm not sure if this makes Sakura or Chloe better. *grin*)

*nod* I was bad and wrote and posted this in one day--I should have made a note that Ino was coming back from her own fight when Sakura's was announced and then ended or something. I'm curious whether we're ever going to see anything with Tenten and Sakura involving Tsunade--probably not, but I would've liked to have known what Tenten thought of Sakura getting to be her idol's pupil and whether she thinks Sakura's not doing too bad a job of it.

Heeee, thank you!

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[info]ceresi
2005-10-18 03:16 am UTC (link)
♥ the Wall of Weird.

Is Tsunade really Tenten's idol? :D I don't remember that, for some reason. . . .

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[info]reimars
2005-10-18 03:22 am UTC (link)
*nod* Yeah. In that flashback where Gai was asking everyone in his team what their dreams were, Tenten's was to be an awesome kunoichi (paraphrased) like Tsunade.

It might have been that that was just Kishimoto-sensei's way of laying the foundation for Jiraiya and Naruto's trek to find her later, but still, I'm curious whether it will ever come up again.

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[info]futago_02
2005-10-28 03:59 am UTC (link)
Love it! Ino really is uncaring when she was young... Sakura is written well... you do feel sorry for ino, but she kinds deserved it...

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[info]reimars
2005-10-28 03:46 pm UTC (link)
*grin* Thanks! I'm hoping Ino's going to have grown up some when we see her again, but with her, it's hard to guess.

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[info]c_caspian
2005-10-29 03:10 pm UTC (link)
Man. I love fics about Sakura and Ino. I prefer to see them with budding romantic potential, but this is starker and truer and a little more painful.

Poor team ten. I mean, they're respectable shinobi; they just happened to graduate with a class full of heroes.

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[info]reimars
2005-10-29 06:11 pm UTC (link)
*grin* Thanks! Ino and Sakura's relationship can swing either way for me, but I think I usually work under the assumption that Ino's the one with a vague unrequited attraction.

They are! And it's a shame that they get seen as lesser for it when they really don't deserve it....

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[info]redbrunja
2008-05-31 05:49 am UTC (link)
Ino snorted. "It's Sakura. She's training to be a medicnin, she won't be different unless one of us breaks something. Otherwise it's still all smarts and a little genjutsu."

"She's pulling her moves," Shikamaru replied.


I love this exchange.

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[info]reimars
2008-06-01 07:19 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! That was one of my favorite bits, too. *grin*

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